In social studies we did two paragraphs on loss of human rights
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Loss of human rights
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Loss of human rights
Iqbal lost his human rights to someone (Hussain Khan) who had no right to have him. He also was sold
by his family who had no other way for money (not knowing where he was going and how he was going
to be treated.) He has to work every day long hours making carpet he had no choice as to the hours he
worked or where he stayed. There was never enough food for any of the workers.It was not fair that
someone took his rights away to place him into bonded labor, he was stuck making carpet for his master.
He was also put into the tomb when he tried to stand up for his rights. He should have had the right to
work reasonable hours and choices when he works. He should have been paid a reasonable amount for
the work he did. He should have been fed a good amount of food and had better washing and toilet.
Human rights were broken when the workers were beaten, kept in the shop and punished unfairly by not
enough food, water and in a dark damp place. All children should have the right to be educated, fed and
given food and water to live.
FINAL DRAFT
Iqbal lost his human rights to someone (Hussain Khan) who had no right to have him. He also was sold by his family who had no other way to get money (not knowing where Iqbal was going and how he was going to be treated.) Iqbal had to work Long hours every day making carpet. He had no choice as to the hours he worked or where he stayed. There was never enough food for any of the workers. It was not fair that someone took Iqbal’s rights away to place him into bonded labor where he was stuck making carpet for his master. He was also put into the tomb when he tried to stand up for his rights. He should have had the right to work reasonable hours and choices when he works. He should have been paid a reasonable amount for the work he did. He should have been fed a good amount of food and had better washing and toilet. Human rights were broken when the workers were beaten, kept in the shop and punished unfairly by not enough food, water and in a dark damp place. All children should have the right to be educated, fed and given food and water to live.
by his family who had no other way for money (not knowing where he was going and how he was going
to be treated.) He has to work every day long hours making carpet he had no choice as to the hours he
worked or where he stayed. There was never enough food for any of the workers.It was not fair that
someone took his rights away to place him into bonded labor, he was stuck making carpet for his master.
He was also put into the tomb when he tried to stand up for his rights. He should have had the right to
work reasonable hours and choices when he works. He should have been paid a reasonable amount for
the work he did. He should have been fed a good amount of food and had better washing and toilet.
Human rights were broken when the workers were beaten, kept in the shop and punished unfairly by not
enough food, water and in a dark damp place. All children should have the right to be educated, fed and
given food and water to live.
FINAL DRAFT
Iqbal lost his human rights to someone (Hussain Khan) who had no right to have him. He also was sold by his family who had no other way to get money (not knowing where Iqbal was going and how he was going to be treated.) Iqbal had to work Long hours every day making carpet. He had no choice as to the hours he worked or where he stayed. There was never enough food for any of the workers. It was not fair that someone took Iqbal’s rights away to place him into bonded labor where he was stuck making carpet for his master. He was also put into the tomb when he tried to stand up for his rights. He should have had the right to work reasonable hours and choices when he works. He should have been paid a reasonable amount for the work he did. He should have been fed a good amount of food and had better washing and toilet. Human rights were broken when the workers were beaten, kept in the shop and punished unfairly by not enough food, water and in a dark damp place. All children should have the right to be educated, fed and given food and water to live.
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