butterflies
for English we had to write about a butterflies theirs this kid that write a story at school she showed the teacher and the story said kill butterflies because when she go's home to her grandparents and went to the garden and she killed them because they eat her food in the garden and then she went home and showed her book to her granddad and grandma and they said what did your teacher say she told them and they said that is fine.
Tuesday, 12 February 2019
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Hi phillip , I like this post because you explained about how she was at school and then she went home to tell her grandparents. Maybe next time you could add in full stops so people can have a breathe while reading the text but this is a good blog post! Keep it up
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