We have been learning how to write a Persuasive Argument. My story was to argue that I should be allowed to paint the walls in my bedroom. My Room, My Walls, My Rules I think I should be able to paint my room so that it can look different and have colour.
I am the one that spends the most time in my room.
My room is special to me because I am the one that spends time there with people or by myself.
It’s my calm
|ing space, when I am feeling angry. I go in my room and calm down and feel better.
Painting my room will keep me busy in the holidays.
Organising and painting will give me something to do, like choosing which colour to use and what kind of paint.
I guess it will take me about a week and a half to do my room.
This is a learning experience for me to try something new.
I could learn things like how to paint and which paint stroke to use. How to prepare the room for painting will be more learning for me.
Therefore I think that I should be able to paint my room because it will keep me busy, I will learn new things and it will make my room more special then it is.
I have been leaning how to make a 3.D shape and here is a link so you can asses it and do 3.D shape
and I says at the top still 3.D 2.D and it moves around I like it. I also think its cool
Monday, 7 November 2016
We have been learning persuasive witting we have a rubric so they see what goals we have set for our selves here is my rubric.
I am learning to write Persuasive witting so I can Persuasive someone and then I know how to Persuasive someone. Scooters are injuring kids, I think that scooters should not be allowed at school at play times.
Scooters are dangerous. Scooters are one of the most dangerous thing that you can ride. Scooters are fast and solid. Kids riding scooters have no idea how fast they are going. They can lose control of the scooter and hit someone putting little kids in danger. Scooters are made out of metal but they can cause a lot of damage.
Scooters dominating the playgrounds. There is barely any room for other people to play as scooters need a lot of room to do tricks and jumps. When organised games are on the concrete area scooters may get on the court where games are being played and making the game stop. Also when they are playing games at play times scooters go right through the area.
Scooting is a dangerous sport because kids don’t wear safety gear. Kids not wearing safety gear while doing tricks including the scooter going over your head could end up in an injury. Kids can fall off the scooter when going to fast and hurt themselves.
Scooters should not be allowed in schools at play times.